I don't write much fanfiction myself but I just read what you have so far and it's pretty good. Do tell, though, why's it rated R? Please tell me it doesn't get any worse than the blood and stuff; I'd like to read more but I try to avoid any sexual content in what I read.
But yes, it's very good so far. I like the detail you use. The way in which Cara keeps switching worlds makes me think a little bit of the book "Eli" too, only Cara goes in and out of both worlds a lot more than the guy in "Eli". I'm not so sure about the Legolas thing, though... [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] (That's just me, though. Not a 'Leggo' fan meself.)
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WWAHD? (What would a Hobbit do?)
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