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Old 05-25-2008, 11:49 AM   #295
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Originally Posted by littlemanpoet View Post
Foley, I've put words in Javan's mouth. Please check and let me know if I need to change anything.
No, it looks alright, mostly. He's still rather heated, so if you want him to exagerate the other boys' transgressions even more, then he could, but that's not necessary.

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