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Does that mean that the rearangement form posting 57 should be incooperated in the final text?
Since we alraedy agreed on the changes in section 3 of the Narn it seems we are done with it.
So what is next? Aiwendil you proposed that we should read through all we have made so fare, but that does not creat any momentum here. I would like to procced again as we did before with a small jump back. I have a first draft for the chapter The Ruin of Beleriand. It would nicely round up the story we have worked on so fare, which tells then the long defied of the Exiles. Since from the Dagor Bargolach the single story are interconeted and woven together in the timimg it also would be good to have our editing of the Narn and the Lay of Leithian 'fresh' in memory for the editing of that particular chapter.
If you agree to it I would post my draft in the members only forum and would work out a reduced version for the public forum with some comments as soon as possible.
Respectfully
Findegil
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