This is an incredibly detailed and comprehensive list of movements. Since I saw that you had listed "Concerning Galadriel and Celeborn" on the outline as "first draft," I can assume you have worked out a timeline which you believe to be correct. What would that be, in bullet point form? As far as I can tell, it seems to be:
- Galadriel is born in Tirion
- Feanor covets her hair / strife between them
- Celeborn is born to the son of Elmo, brother of Thingol
- Rebellion of the Noldor, Galadiriel goes with feanor
- Kinslaying: Galadriel fights feanor in defense of the Swanhaven
- leads the Noldor across the ice
- Mereth Aderthad
- She goes to Doriath to dwell with Melian
- Meets Celeborn and falls in love / marries
- visits Nargothrond
- journeys over the mountains with Celeborn
- returns to Doriath / the Havens of Sirion / Ossiriand
- refuses the pardon of the Valar
- dwells in Lindon
and from there it gets more murky, but this seems to me to be the generally consistent plot of events for the first age. Am I misreading it?
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