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Originally Posted by gondowe
On Tar-Elmar I agree with Findegil's two points. I think is not a text to include. For example, Aldarion's tale has a summary ending that I think works (in my version I prelude it saying that the rest of the tale is lost but some fragments still stood and can finish the story, or the battle of the fords of Isen that the rest is lost, but the extant text is enough developed to be inserted.
And the same of Tar-Elmar could be said about The New Shadow.
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I have tidied up the story in a way, which (to me at least) seems pretty nice. I have added at the end a note which says that the rest of the story was lost - and that the fate of Tal-Elmar and the rest of his proposed voyages remains unknown.