I just wanted to put forth my ideas about the upcoming conflict that will arise between Ędegard and Argeleafa, for littlemanpoet's approval.
When Ędegard tells Leafa that he cannot marry her, due to the lack of a hand, she, being such a meek, timid, submissive girl, will give in, though sorrowful. They can be miserable for a time, and then Liornung will find out what's going on and he will take on the role he's had for a long time: the fiddler who's forever fixing up affairs between two young lovers. He might not fix things (right away?), but he'll certainly talk with both of them.
Will this contradict anything you had in mind? Is the idea all right in itself?
Beautiful posting, everyone. I'm sure Helen's awfully proud of you as a leader would be, and I'm awfully proud of you all as my fellow soldiers!
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