I like it. Two questions--
1. A picky question: why brown eyes instead of grey (Imrahil's eyes were grey?)
2. "She dreams of Mithrellas and Imrazor but does not know it." Why not? Maybe because she confuses them with her parents or perhaps with other relatives? Can she tell the dream-stories? Or does she completely forget them before she awakes?
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...down to the water to see the elves dance and sing upon the midsummer's eve.
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