FY-HL-21: Agreed, it is superfluous, so we can leave it out.
WR-SL-06: I did this because Gandalf has known Denethor for a long time, so he would not be said to 'meet' him for the first time, but we can change it to 'met' if you prefer, I do not feel strongly either way.
WR-SL-09: Agreed.
WR-SL-12/14: Very well, we can keep it.
WR-SL-15: Agreed to this change.
WR-SL-22: I will fix these.
Compared to the last chapters, this was very painless!
Last edited by ArcusCalion; 07-21-2018 at 06:08 PM.
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