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Old 01-18-2019, 10:38 PM   #5
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1) I honestly don't think this matters much. I personally see no need to change it.

2) good catch.

I was waiting for your review of this chapter before posting this, but when you reviewed Gondor and the Heirs of Anarion, you moved the bulk of the second paragraph of this chapter there. Therefore, we need to remove it here:
HE-SL-06b <BFI Appendix (ii) {In ancient days the southern and eastern bounds ..... dwelt apart and had few dealings with other men.} When the days of the Kings ended (1975-2050) and the waning of Gondor began, HE-SL-06.5 {they}the Dunlendings ceased in fact to be subjects of Gondor; the Royal Road was unkept ....
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