I think this would be a good time to finalize this project and the Ainulindale.
I think we are agreed on refraining from using CT's editorial addition concerning Eonwe.
Another point I noticed as I glanced at the changes again:
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Vala-05
the Sindar Tauron, the Lord of [the] Forests.
The translation of Tauron should be 'the Lord of the Forests'.
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There is no reason whatsoever to insert the article "the". "Lord of Forests" is just as good a translation as "Lord of the Forests".
Other than that, I think all the changes are good.
We should each look over this and, if no one has any other complaints, consider it done.