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Old 11-07-2017, 01:47 PM   #40
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In this chapter I can not opine very much save in minor points. My text structure differs so much of this. But the information is the same.

Perhaps Arvalin is changed to Avathar many times, where Avathar is the south, for example in Mandos dwelings ?(maybe I'm oxidized geographically).

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Aiwendil said
VT-LT-04: I don't think changing "Outer Lands" is necessary in this instance. Here, it refers to the lands outside Valinor, including Middle-earth. The problematic instance was one where it was used to mean the lands beyond Middle-earth, including Valinor.

I agree with this.

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