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gandalf85 · 01-15-2019, 06:28 PM

4) You're exactly right, Findegil! I think the main reason this sentence felt off is because it doesn't have the proper context. In "Of the Rings of Power" this sentence is in a discussion of the Istari, so I like your proposed change.

01-15-2019, 06:28 PM	#15
gandalf85 Wight Join Date: Mar 2014 Posts: 121	4) You're exactly right, Findegil! I think the main reason this sentence felt off is because it doesn't have the proper context. In "Of the Rings of Power" this sentence is in a discussion of the Istari, so I like your proposed change.