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Old 01-15-2006, 06:01 PM   #29
Aiwendil
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RG-27: Yes, I missed the comma.

RG-73: I think your suggestion is good, as long as we make two transpositions to prevent alliteration on the last strong syllable:

Quote:
NA-RG-73 and {Flinding}[Gwindor] knew it {at the feet of the king}like {stone graven}graven stone { standing silent}
with heart laden}standing silent; but the son of Húrin{'s son}
I think we are (provisionally) done with this section - though there may well be better solutions available for certain lines if we look harder.
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