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ArcusCalion · 07-20-2018, 10:24 PM

FY-HL-21: Agreed, it is superfluous, so we can leave it out.

WR-SL-06: I did this because Gandalf has known Denethor for a long time, so he would not be said to 'meet' him for the first time, but we can change it to 'met' if you prefer, I do not feel strongly either way.

WR-SL-09: Agreed.

WR-SL-12/14: Very well, we can keep it.

WR-SL-15: Agreed to this change.

WR-SL-22: I will fix these.

Compared to the last chapters, this was very painless!

07-20-2018, 10:24 PM	#3
ArcusCalion Quentingolmo Join Date: Aug 2017 Posts: 525	FY-HL-21: Agreed, it is superfluous, so we can leave it out. WR-SL-06: I did this because Gandalf has known Denethor for a long time, so he would not be said to 'meet' him for the first time, but we can change it to 'met' if you prefer, I do not feel strongly either way. WR-SL-09: Agreed. WR-SL-12/14: Very well, we can keep it. WR-SL-15: Agreed to this change. WR-SL-22: I will fix these. Compared to the last chapters, this was very painless! Last edited by ArcusCalion; 07-21-2018 at 06:08 PM.