I have an issue with the lifting of Lond Daer out of the parentheses of the original. So what about this:
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… The fellings had at first been along both banks of the Gwathló, and timber had been floated down to the haven LD-SL-02.5c (Lond Daer<editorial addition based on Aldarion and Erendis Note 9 , which was of old called Vinyalondë>); but now the Númenóreans drove great tracks and roads into the forests ...
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Respectfully
Findegil