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Nogrod · 12-29-2007, 04:41 PM

Changes made. The two sisters are outside the scene now.

It's kind of a good twist to the plot indeed that they're away as well as Rôg. Makes the future a bit more complicated... trust gained can be easily lost and that's a part of a gripping story.

12-29-2007, 04:41 PM	#26
Nogrod Flame of the Ainulindalë Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Wearing rat's coat, crowskin, crossed staves in a field behaving as the wind behaves Posts: 9,330	Changes made. The two sisters are outside the scene now. It's kind of a good twist to the plot indeed that they're away as well as Rôg. Makes the future a bit more complicated... trust gained can be easily lost and that's a part of a gripping story. __________________ Upon the hearth the fire is red Beneath the roof there is a bed; But not yet weary are our feet...