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Old 11-30-2017, 06:08 PM   #11
ArcusCalion
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Looking at the structure, I think we should consider making "Of the Coming of Men into the West and the Meeting of the Edain and the Eldar" the title of the chapter, and have "Of the Kindreds and Houses of the Edain" and "The Druedain" be subheadings. The name of the chapter "Of the {Naugrim and the} Edain" seems redundant.
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