Is there some way to revise what has happened already? Such as, could Torim come later? Perhaps a whole week later?
I do like the idea of Sorn throwing the rescuing party off the scent, but it would have to be pretty convincing what with Torim's testimony.
I still think it would be good to have Sorn go into hiding and/or besiegement. The fake letter could be part of his attempt to buy time to go hide.
Bad weather is another option, but again, it would have to be pretty bad.
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