1) Good catch!
2) Agreed, we should name that change
GHA-SL-14.6.
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AN-SL-21.6b: Agreed.
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AN-SL-24: Yes, transition is bad. But your suggestion will change the sense to much. The biggest issue is for me the missing reference: compared to whom is Mithrandir most vigilant? And this lake of reference is due to our editing. So what about
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AN-SL-24c<ORP Ever most vigilant among the Istari was Mithrandir, and he it was that most doubted the darkness in Mirkwood, ...
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Does that smothe the transition in your opinion?
Respectfully
Findegil