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Does that mean that the rearangement form posting 57 should be incooperated in the final text?
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It looks good to me. I still think there's a little redundancy between the prose and verse material, but that's not necessarily a problem. The latest version that you posted is definitely one I can live with, and it's probably better to leave it as it is than to get into a lot of difficult revisions to the verse to remove small redundancies.
I would still like to go over the completed chapters again sometime relatively soon, as I've found a number of corrections that I think should be made; however, it may indeed be a better idea to get 'The Ruin of Beleriand' done first. So I propose that we go ahead with that, as Findegil suggests, and then return to the completed chapters.