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Old 09-03-2017, 07:04 AM   #2
Findegil
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I appritiate your work and wante to know you that I have read it, so not yet analysed in detail.

Only oe remarke at once about your editing to be usefully for the next draft: When you skip paragraphs or passages, it would be much easier if you would still give here a few words at the start and the end of the skiped passage.

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