Orual, these first two paragraphs in your latest post gave me the impression that you think that Gwyllion is his older sister, when in fact she is his younger sister. At the beginning I had him lie about her age and tell the others that she was his older...now he slipped and he told Ravion that she was two years younger than himself.
Cheers!
Imladris
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I'm sorry it wasn't a unicorn. It would have been nice to have unicorns.
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