I have rearranged the posts and added some to mine - which I moved to the end of the other posts.
I also edited this part of your post, Oro:
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She took her hand and wiped them off, but they continued to come. "I'm sorry." Firiel said and laughed. "I'm just going to miss this earth....and….." We know Erkaliel said. "So will all of us." She continued.
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Erkaliel had gone down to the docks following the companions, not with them; she spoke only to Tanroth, and then went on to the Ship - so Firiel could not have spoken to her. I edited in Solondil's name instead.
Hope this is all ok. I think it tracks well enough now.
There is now room for Tanroth to say whatever more he needs to and for Firiel and the others to finish up and get on board the ship.