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Old 01-15-2019, 03:17 PM   #14
Findegil
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1) Good catch!

2) Agreed, we should name that change GHA-SL-14.6.

3) AN-SL-21.6b: Agreed.

4) AN-SL-24: Yes, transition is bad. But your suggestion will change the sense to much. The biggest issue is for me the missing reference: compared to whom is Mithrandir most vigilant? And this lake of reference is due to our editing. So what about:
Quote:
AN-SL-24c<ORP Ever most vigilant among the Istari was Mithrandir, and he it was that most doubted the darkness in Mirkwood, ...
Does that smothe the transition in your opinion?

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