A few comments as fare as I can do in a rush:
Line 331: Done.
BL-EX-03: I think you missed one line, but you are correct that it is ungramatical. What about
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BL-EX-03 <Lay; old Version BL-EX-04 Then {all his}[on a] journey{'s} lonely he fare,
BL-EX-05 {the}[of] hunger and {the}[of] haggard care,
the awful mountains' stones he stained
with blood of weary feet, and gained
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BL-EX-06: agreed, so not happily.
Line 764: Verry good catch. I agree to your suggestion.
BL-RG-00.5: I like your suggestion, but I think the coma has to stay. The 'tree-propped halls' are Taurons halls in Valmaren it is not a description of the forest he rides in:
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Mayhap the Lord {Tauros}[Tauron] from his gate
BL-RG-00.5 and tree-propped halls, {the forest-god}in forests old
rides his great stallion {golden-shod}shod with gold
amid the trumpets' tempest loud,
amid his green-clad hunters proud,
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All the Finrafin's I could find are corrected.
I will come back to the rest later on.
Respectfuly
Findegil