Thread: * * Revised Fall of Gondolin pt.4 -- >end [the remaining sections] * *
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Old 08-18-2003, 08:49 PM   #33
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I think that if you keep this last part as it is, it is understood (at least by me) that some Balrogs did indeed died in that battle.
I agree. I am sympathetic with Findegil's desire to include more of the last sentence, but I'd rather leave it out than risk suggesting the death of some Balrogs.
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