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alaklondewen · 04-20-2004, 09:23 PM

I've filled in the SAVE on post #115. Adelard has thrown his fit. Memory - I say let's bring the story forward, and let the reader know through reflection that May is now taking care of him. I'm sure whatever compassion she was feeling toward him he has stomped with his hatefulness. Let me know if anything needs work.

I hope we will hear from the Whitfoots regarding Alora's near death experience. If no one posts tomorrow, I will put up another general save and we'll keep going. Still more exciting things to come!

Nice posts Fordim and Regin.

04-20-2004, 09:23 PM	#308
alaklondewen Song of Seregon Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Following the road less traveled Posts: 1,193	I've filled in the SAVE on post #115. Adelard has thrown his fit. Memory - I say let's bring the story forward, and let the reader know through reflection that May is now taking care of him. I'm sure whatever compassion she was feeling toward him he has stomped with his hatefulness. Let me know if anything needs work. I hope we will hear from the Whitfoots regarding Alora's near death experience. If no one posts tomorrow, I will put up another general save and we'll keep going. Still more exciting things to come! Nice posts Fordim and Regin. __________________ At last I understand why we have waited! This is the ending. Now not day only shall be beloved, but night too shall be beautiful and blessed and all its fear pass away!