A couple of things I noticed:
In DE-EX-07b, DE-EX-07.3, DE-EX-07.6, DE-EX-09, and DE-EX-10, there are instances of "Aule" instead of "Aulë".
DE-EX-04: "Yet the making of thing..." should be "Yet the making of things..."
DE-EX-05: An instance of "Iluvatar" instead of "Ilúvatar".
If these sorts of minor corrections are inappropriate for this stage of the project, please don't hesitate to say so.
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