Two quick things:
I think "Behold the towers and mansions of ice!" should be put back in; but how does everyone feel about it?
Yavanna-tree Situation:
The whole statement is a little out of step with the rest of the narrative, since it comes from an aside to Aelfwine. I think we all agree that if it's in the text Pengolod and not Rumil put it there. But "quoth Pengolod" wouldn't work, neither of the authors are ever mentioned outside of the headings.
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Ishkhaqwi ai durugnul?
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