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VE-01: Agreed to all your changes.
Don't you know that the best mariners can not swim? A good swimmer would probably leave a ship in danger to early. So I don't think Voronwë would necessarily be a swimmer.
VE-07: Corrected.
VE-10: Agreed.
VE-11: Agreed.
VE-11.025: Agreed.
'Maybe it was due ...': I agree to remove 'thus they'. I will research the sources. but that might take some time.
VE-11.02: Agreed.
VE-11.04: Corrected.
VE-13.02: Corrected.
VE-15: Corrected.
VE-19: Following ArcusCalion's idea we changed {Leitian}[Lindon].
VE-21: Agreed.
Respectfully
Findegil
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