The departure seems a bit abrupt to me, still (pondering what I should do to fix it); and I think there should be a post regarding Bella, Leafa, and Mellonin settling down a bit more. Maybe sharing a cup of tea, something domestic and soothing, and talking about the men's departure and discussing their "new future." Apart from that-- any other felt needs?? I think we're not far from opening the new thread.
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...down to the water to see the elves dance and sing upon the midsummer's eve.
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