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Wight
Join Date: Jan 2009
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As a minor thing I detected revising your draft. I think that this chapter is a good one to include a passage (that f.e. I entitled Of de buildings of the Eldar) at the end with material extracted from Words, phrases and Passages in PE17 pages 108, 109.
I give the work to you because I have not the digitised text in English. Only have a composition extraction copied from the issue translated by me into Spanish. Greetings |
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