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Elennar Starfire · 08-05-2003, 10:47 AM

Guy who be short, that is so good! I almost cried reading it. *sniffles*

Here's mine:

Teeth and eggses, fish and time,
Answers to riddles asked in rhyme,
A promise broken, an underground chase,
Escape through a door left only one trace,
Buttons scattered on the ground.
Then running away without making a sound,
A surprise for companions then traveling on,
Onward till the light was gone,
To find the Lonely Mountain tall,
Where dragon slept in hidden hall,
There lay the mighty dragon Smaug,
Looking like a flying frog.
A stolen cup Smaug's wrath awoke,
and part of the mountain went up in smoke...

That's as far as I've gotten, and I need to add more that I left out. My friend came up with the flying frog bit.

[ August 05, 2003: Message edited by: Elennar Starfire ]

08-05-2003, 10:47 AM	#20
Elennar Starfire Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: May 2003 Location: Nowhere...now here Posts: 952	Guy who be short, that is so good! I almost cried reading it. sniffles Here's mine: Teeth and eggses, fish and time, Answers to riddles asked in rhyme, A promise broken, an underground chase, Escape through a door left only one trace, Buttons scattered on the ground. Then running away without making a sound, A surprise for companions then traveling on, Onward till the light was gone, To find the Lonely Mountain tall, Where dragon slept in hidden hall, There lay the mighty dragon Smaug, Looking like a flying frog. A stolen cup Smaug's wrath awoke, and part of the mountain went up in smoke... That's as far as I've gotten, and I need to add more that I left out. My friend came up with the flying frog bit. [ August 05, 2003: Message edited by: Elennar Starfire ] __________________ Don't let me die!