Corsairs and Corsets Discussion Thread Part 1

[Elora]

As Snowdog proved so clever in figuring out the time and day here in Oz, I feel compelled to try and do the same.

Apologies for the mistake in logistics Maikafanawen. I did indeed miss it, the danger of posting whilst tired. I have since edited, so that the confrontation between Dryea and Ruiel takes place in Ruiel's chambers.

Now, I did write some dialogue for your character, something I prefer to abstain from until I am better familiar with a character's lexicon and style. I didn't add the emotional state behind Dryea's words, but expect that she'd be incensed, anxious and upset at her mother's overbearing interference. I thought I was pushing the line far enough with the dialogue and didn't chance it further with the underlying character emotional state.

Hopefully, I've amended my gaff, and I do apologise. I know this edit comes to you on Wednesday evening (ta da - show off mastery of international time zones [img]smilies/wink.gif[/img] ) and appreciate the gracious patience of all concerned.

I shall endeavour to prevent this sort of obvious mistake occuring in my posts again.

Now, this is where I say "DOH!" and slap my forehead. [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img]