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Estelo dagnir, Melo ring
Join Date: Oct 2002
Posts: 3,063
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Orofaniel - Please disregard my PM. I was in a rush, and, once again, my thoughts were unorganized. If the part of a Haradrim captain of the main forces is what you still wish to play, I will be getting back to you on your bio shortly.
The Perky Ent - I find your character a very interesting one, and the history is extremely well done. But, I think a little more is needed to describe both your character's appearance and personality, with more needed the latter. Also, as always, I remind you to review it and be nitpicky! ![]() Hama Of The Riddermark - I think more is needed for your character's personality as well. I'd like a little more of an idea what Lómarandil is like. And concerning your first post: I ask you to go back and read my first post, as yours contradicts a good bit of what went on in mine. I like the orc dialogue, but...well, you'll see what I mean. Also, we would not be taking word to Thranduil. Here, for the reference of those constructing on reviewing bios: Outline of game:
-------------- Timeframes: Time Periods (for a basic idea of the order of things): Mikwood scout party scouts out and follows army (days 1 – 3) Envoy captured – a party splits off to take captives back to Dol Guldur (day 3) Envoy rescued – Plans of evil forces made clear (night of day 3 – day 4) Race back to Lorien (days 4 – 7) Defenders warned/inner defenders rescued from surprise attack (night of day 7 – day 8) Lorien front lines hold off main force (day 9) Enemy held – Retreat (day 11) Kransha - All that you said sounds good, but I will read your edited bio over. Thanks for the changes! And thanks to all, especially the submitters of bios that I am so pestering! ![]() -Durelin
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