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10-30-2009, 06:23 PM
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Flame of the Ainulindalė
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Wearing rat's coat, crowskin, crossed staves in a field behaving as the wind behaves
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 But just a little thought on your last post Fea... You write about Athanar's men raising up in anger. Actually there are only his wife, his two boys, and his right-hand man present. I don't think Lommy would think it a bad reaction if you changed the "Athanar's men made to rise angrily" into "Athanar's sons made to rise angrily"... What I know of them it would actually look like a perfect reaction for them...  PS. I can see the beginning of a wonderful friendship here...
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