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Quentingolmo
Join Date: Aug 2017
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SP-SL-03.5: If it is used later on, then I think it is fine to leave it the way you had it.
SP-SL-04: Sounds good, I will leave it in Volume 3. SP-SL-07: I agree that it is beneficial to mention these leaders here. I would suggest this as a solution: Quote:
SP-SL-12.7: Ahhh I see, I had forgotten about the supremacy of RGEO. You are right in your original draft in that case, and I rescind my suggestion. SP-SL-15: I see now your reasoning, but I think it is better to leave the sentence off entirely then, instead of to include CT's commentary. SP-SL-25.5/25.7: I think this change is all that is required. In later drafts re included more inserts about the changes in Sindarin due to the Silvan influence, so I do not think we need to make that explicit here. I think the {adopting}[learning] change is sufficient to set the stage, and conveys the meaning. Last edited by ArcusCalion; 05-06-2018 at 11:48 PM. |
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