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Findegil · 02-12-2019, 03:07 PM

1) Vala-02.45: The addition about Varda from MT is okay for me.

4) Vala-04.3: I think the attributes of being a death goddess were lost for Niënna in the later legendary. So I agree to gandalf85 that this addition is critical.

5) Vala-05.25: Of these names only ‘Tuivána’ is used later. Nonetheless the adition could be considered.

6) Vala-06: Ómar is used later, so we could add him, but I think it was by intention that the sub-chapter ends with Olorin.

Vala-07.23b: In thah way it would mean that Eru was a created power, which is not true.

Vala-07: I am okay with removing the apostrophes.

Respectfully
Findegil

02-12-2019, 03:07 PM	#29
Findegil King's Writer Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 1,721	1) Vala-02.45: The addition about Varda from MT is okay for me. 4) Vala-04.3: I think the attributes of being a death goddess were lost for Niënna in the later legendary. So I agree to gandalf85 that this addition is critical. 5) Vala-05.25: Of these names only ‘Tuivána’ is used later. Nonetheless the adition could be considered. 6) Vala-06: Ómar is used later, so we could add him, but I think it was by intention that the sub-chapter ends with Olorin. Vala-07.23b: In thah way it would mean that Eru was a created power, which is not true. Vala-07: I am okay with removing the apostrophes. Respectfully Findegil