DoV/RotS: the outline and editing discussions

[Gwaihir the Windlord]

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Re: Oujtside

<blockquote>Quote:<hr> frankly being puzzled that you alluded to using some creative writing to smooth things out , which I hoped had been made clear by M,D, and I was outside of the parameters of what were attempting . <hr></blockquote>

Well, it wasn't much, was it? All I did was say that Morgoth used his knife on Telperion, not the Noldo's sword. And we're cutting out the Noldo. So I'd say that that is probably the best choice.

Great, lindil! Let's see a bracketed version from you too. How's mine?

(btw please see the <a href="http://www.barrowdowns.com/cgi-bin/ultimatebb.cgi?ubb=get_topic&f=14&t=000000thebarro wdownsthebarrowdowns</a> for an explanation to my absence recently.)

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