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The Only Real Estel · 07-21-2003, 10:47 AM

It may have been a tad overdone, but I think that is mostly attributed to the slow-motion of it all. Still, that's got to knock the wind out of you at the very least, he felt like he'd 'been caught between a hammer and an anvil' or something like that. His movements before falling to the ground in pain could be passed off as desperate gasps for breath. So I don't think it was SOOO bad.

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07-21-2003, 10:47 AM	#6
The Only Real Estel Raffish Rapscallion Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Far from the 'Downs, it seems :-( Posts: 2,835	It may have been a tad overdone, but I think that is mostly attributed to the slow-motion of it all. Still, that's got to knock the wind out of you at the very least, he felt like he'd 'been caught between a hammer and an anvil' or something like that. His movements before falling to the ground in pain could be passed off as desperate gasps for breath. So I don't think it was SOOO bad.