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02-17-2004, 07:12 AM
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Haunting Spirit
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Wotton-on-the-Edge
Posts: 86
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Nobody's done this one yet, I think. I had trouble with the rhythm but I think it's alright now.
Strange little land of peace and tranquility Home to the Hobbit-folk. Inventors of golf and of smoking. Rigours of life don't effect them Everybody happy with their lot. Re-reading it, its not quite right, but the form doesn't require perfect rhythm or metre does it?
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