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| View Poll Results: What do you think about the principle of 'ReVersing' | |||
| Great! Keep it up! The poetry of the kind has an independent value, it deserves a book all to itself! |
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8 | 40.00% |
| Good! It is re-creative in a sense it lives opon other’s work, but good application of one’s creative abilities nevertheless. Just don’t expect much from it |
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11 | 55.00% |
| Indifferent. Really, it’s desultory. Have fun if you like, I don’t care, but stop forcing your megalomaniac ramblings on me! |
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1 | 5.00% |
| Horrible! How dared you to deal with Tolkien in such an insulting way! Don’t even think about ReVersing another piece of rhyme! |
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0 | 0% |
| Multiple Choice Poll. Voters: 20. You may not vote on this poll | |||
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The Hoard
When the moon was new and the sun young
of silver and gold the gods sung: in the green grass they silver spilled, and the white waters they with gold filled. Ere the pit was dug or Hell yawned, ere dwarf was bred or dragon spawned, there were Elves of old, and strong spells under green hills in hollow dells they sang as they wrought many fair things, and the bright crowns of the Elf-kings. But their doom fell, and their song waned, by iron hewn and by steel chained. Greed that sang not, nor with mouth smiled, in dark holes their wealth piled, graven silver and carven gold: over Elvenhome the shadow rolled. There was an old dwarf in a dark cave, to silver and gold his fingers clave; with hammer and tongs and anvil-stone he worked his hands to the hard bone. and coins he made, and strings of rings, and thought to buy the power of kings. But his eyes grew dim and his ears dull and the skin yellow on his old skull; through his bony claw with a pale sheen the stony jewels slipped unseen. No feet he heard, though the earth quaked. when the young dragon his thirst slaked. and the stream smoked at his dark door. The flames hissed on the dank floor, and he died alone in the red fire; his bones were ashes in the hot mire. There was an old dragon under grey stone; his red eyes blinked as he lay alone. His joy was dead and his youth spent, he was knobbed and wrinkled, and his limbs bent in the long years to his gold chained; in his heart's furnace the fire waned. To his belly's slime gems stuck thick, silver and gold he would snuff and lick: he knew the place of the least ring beneath the shadow of his black wing. Of thieves he thought on his hard bed, and dreamed that on their flesh he fed, their bones crushed, and their blood drank: his ears drooped and his breath sank. Mail-rings rang. He heard them not. A voice echoed in his deep grot: a young warrior with a bright sword called him forth to defend his hoard. His teeth were knives, and of horn his hide, but iron tore him, and his flame died. There was an old king on a high throne: his white beard lay on knees of bone; his mouth savoured neither meat nor drink, nor his ears song; he could only think of his huge chest with carven lid where pale gems and gold lay hid in secret treasury in the dark ground; its strong doors were iron-bound. The swords of his thanes were dull with rust, his glory fallen, his rule unjust, his halls hollow, and his bowers cold, but king he was of elvish gold. He heard not the horns in the mountain-pass, he smelt not the blood on the trodden grass, but his halls were burned, his kingdom lost; in a cold pit his bones were tossed. There is an old hoard in a dark rock, forgotten behind doors none can unlock; that grim gate no man can pass. On the mound grows the green grass; there sheep feed and the larks soar, and the wind blows from the sea-shore. The old hoard the Night shall keep, while earth waits and the Elves sleep ********************** The aged earth will lie all cold, senile With crust of mould and rotting vile Iron rust will cover ruins bare Brown dust for bleeding feet to fare When the mountains crumble an’ sweep Giants will die, and humans weep New-born orks will sprawl out, cover all Out o’darkling caves, and the trees will fall Ruin they will bring, hack and blood Cruelest of slaves, out they’ll come like flood Chance will rule, no law, the stronger hand Spoiled be alike the sea and the land Wretched they’ll be, and they will not last Like ants o’er hill and plain marching fast Crumpled steel and dusted lead With the wind blown like a seed There’ll be youthful giant on a stripped plain Steel and lead he’ll give away bain With nails and planks he’ll toy at will And with such a play his feet heal And cubes he’ll break, and squares he’ll smash Combined rule for him’ll be hash His toes’ll be quick, his fingers fast His stomach huge and waist so vast He’ll spy the sparrows flyin by And pebbles falling from the sky He’ll mark them go, all pigeons old As they pass over waters cold He’ll be reborn in green of pool And never will he loose his wool There’ll be dove over black mire Of all his tribe the king and sire Among their thousands youngster frail With finest feather of hue grey-pale Free for one day them all to lead With jet-black eye of fiery bead Droplets falling down his pearly wing Steely voice for his song to sing He will give no care for the giant’s cube And he’ll bother not with the orkish tube O’er the mire he’ll settle, pigeonhole to build Palace for himself, wordmoot for his guild Strong he’ll grow, of eye and of the heart Fast he’ll be as wind, as storm, as flying dart He will see them go, monks in hats of cork Who will heed him not, wielding rusted forks Heading off his mire, where he’ll grow so strong Ruling flying hosts and cooing throngs There they will be, humble monks of Fork Keen of sight beneath their hats of cork Shaven rosy cheeks utter sign of health Feasting day and night, needing there no stealth They will sing by day, they will dance by night They will keep no goods and will travel light Over shining water, mirror of the sky Like to clouds white in the breeze to fly Their forks they’ll polish to make them shine The fame of their cook will gather guests to dine Their huts so warm, shelter in the lee The keep of love, joy and leaping glee Tables will snow food and wine will fall like rain Fiddles hum the tune to praise their happy reign Realm they’ll found for seekers after quick to find Rest with peace of heart, neath the sign of hind There the wealth will be given free For each who asks on the count of three There the door will be open wide All secrets be gone, and no vice to hide The Day shall shine, the sea shore be calm Air be sweet, flowers bloom and exhale balm Woods will rise anew, all the ice be rived Sprinkling silver dew o’er the earth revived
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