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| View Poll Results: What do you think about the principle of 'ReVersing' | |||
| Great! Keep it up! The poetry of the kind has an independent value, it deserves a book all to itself! |
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8 | 40.00% |
| Good! It is re-creative in a sense it lives opon other’s work, but good application of one’s creative abilities nevertheless. Just don’t expect much from it |
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11 | 55.00% |
| Indifferent. Really, it’s desultory. Have fun if you like, I don’t care, but stop forcing your megalomaniac ramblings on me! |
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1 | 5.00% |
| Horrible! How dared you to deal with Tolkien in such an insulting way! Don’t even think about ReVersing another piece of rhyme! |
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0 | 0% |
| Multiple Choice Poll. Voters: 20. You may not vote on this poll | |||
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Deadnight Chanter
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Goodly re-Verse, that, my compliments
![]() But I wonder would Lay of Leithian prove bite too big to chew?..
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Night In Wight Satin
Join Date: May 2000
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This seems more entertaining than educational, so I'm moving it to Mirth.
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Deadnight Chanter
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Move it to Mirth re: Justly so, I suppose I should have placed it here in the first place
Pauper/King re: President as elected, and more or less controlled spearhead of establishment, seen as the representation of "rule of all" seemed ideal opposite to king, as obtaining his power by birthright, still more with the latter being absolute wielder of one for a lifetime, and allegedly having it delegated in a divine convergence
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Shade of Carn Dûm
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: A place where after thunder golden showers come falling like a rain of flowers.
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Ah, thanks for clearing that up.
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Barrel Song
Down the swift dark stream you go
Back to lands you once did know! Leave the halls and caverns deep, Leave the northern mountains steep, Where the forest wide and dim Stoops in shadow grey and grim! Float beyond the world of trees Out into the whispering breeze, Past the rushes, past the reeds, Past the marsh's waving weeds, Through the mist that riseth white Up from mere and pool at night! Follow, follow stars that leap Up the heavens cold and steep; Turn when dawn comes over land, Over rapid, over sand, South away! and South away! Seek the sunlight and the day, Back to pasture, back to mead, Where the kine and oxen feed! Back to gardens on the hills Where the berry swells and fills Under sunlight, under day! South away! and South away! Down the swift dark stream you go Back to lands you once did know! ************************************ Up the light slow slope I toil From the sea I never roil On from home on plains widespread In the south free from dread Where meadows wide and free Bask in sunlight full of glee In I go to river’s source Up to highlands on my course By I pass the shady groves On my slow and hazy roves In the heat of midday sun On the dry sand oft I run When the moon comes down to ground Stars to earth by morn are bound Yet the eve comes creeping on Over desert than I’m gone North I come, with hardy toil Seeking night which none can spoil On to highland and the rock Where heights all passers mock Where pines so proud and tall Never pay the axeman’s toll Where dark of roots is strong Where stags come crowned with prongs Up the light slow slope I toil From the sea I never roil
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Song dwarves sung at Bilbo's
Far over the misty mountains cold
To dungeons deep and caverns old We must away ere break of day To seek the pale enchanted gold. The dwarves of yore made mighty spells, While hammers fell like ringing bells In places deep, where dark things sleep, In hollow halls beneath the fells. For ancient king and elvish lord There many a gloaming golden hoard They shaped and wrought, and light they caught To hide in gems on hilt of sword. On silver necklaces they strung The flowering stars, on crowns they hung The dragon-fire, in twisted wire They meshed the light of moon and sun. Far over the misty mountains cold To dungeons deep and caverns old We must away, ere break of day, To claim our long-forgotten gold. Goblets they carved there for themselves And harps of gold; where no man delves There lay they long, and many a song Was sung unheard by men or elves. The pines were roaring on the height, The winds were moaning in the night. The fire was red, it flaming spread; The trees like torches biased with light, The bells were ringing in the dale And men looked up with faces pale; The dragon's ire more fierce than fire Laid low their towers and houses frail. The mountain smoked beneath the moon; The dwarves, they heard the tramp of doom. They fled their hall to dying -fall Beneath his feet, beneath the moon. Far over the misty mountains grim To dungeons deep and caverns dim We must away, ere break of day, To win our harps and gold from him! ******************************** Nigh under sunlit plains so hot From peaks so high there mist stays not They soon will ride when eve’s astride To bury trove of lead in pot The giants today are dumb and mute But nails they drive with tinkle cute High up on moors, where trees are poor They moo and dance and play their lutes From modern lackey, orkish slave So few and dull was taken prey Though they hacked it all, and heaps so tall They piled up in effort brave Some copper collars there they tore And orbs of iron down they bore And icy pools, with venom and drools They made unclean and went ashore Nigh under sunlit plains so hot From peaks so high where mist stays not They soon will ride when eve’s astride To abnegate their lead in pot Some forks they bent, and knives alike And smashed double-bass with one strike They danced fast on top of vast Their yells were loud, and long their pike The moss was quiet under stones The heat was full of buzzing drones The pool was green, no smoke was seen As meadow filled with irksome crones No sound was heard up on the slope As elves forsook their only hope And snails were calm, as hold on palm And tents were held on sturdy rope The air was clear in rays of sun As giants dumb but keen for run Came back from walk, and silent talk Of lead and pot was banned for fun Nigh under sunlit plains so bright From peaks so high where cool is night They soon will ride when eve’s astride To yield their lead, and pots will light
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Egroeg Ihkhsal - Would you believe in the love at first sight? - Yes I'm certain that it happens all the time! |
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Awesome Thread! Good job HI, as well as everyone else who did one. I'd do a really funny/witty one...but I'm too lazy
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