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View Poll Results: What do you think about the principle of 'ReVersing' | |||
Great! Keep it up! The poetry of the kind has an independent value, it deserves a book all to itself! |
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8 | 40.00% |
Good! It is re-creative in a sense it lives opon other’s work, but good application of one’s creative abilities nevertheless. Just don’t expect much from it |
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11 | 55.00% |
Indifferent. Really, it’s desultory. Have fun if you like, I don’t care, but stop forcing your megalomaniac ramblings on me! |
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1 | 5.00% |
Horrible! How dared you to deal with Tolkien in such an insulting way! Don’t even think about ReVersing another piece of rhyme! |
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Deadnight Chanter
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The Cat
The fat cat on the mat
may seem to dream of nice mice that suffice for him, or cream; but he free, maybe, walks in thought unbowed, proud, where loud roared and fought his kin, lean and slim, or deep in den in the East feasted on beasts and tender men. The giant lion with iron claw in paw, and huge ruthless tooth in gory jaw; the paid dark-starred, fleet upon feet, that oft soft from aloft leaps on his meat where woods loom in gloom- far now they be, fierce and free, and tamed is he; but fat cat on the mat kept as a pet, he does not forget. ********************************* Though mice feed on rice And may look for a nook For the paw to go And the hook to rook But they fly on high In their dreams To the dark to hark Silent screams To where bats knit and tat Or upside on the bough In angle tangle go dangle Leather wings to sough Trough the air with dare Glide and slide Hunting moth and bug Pip and gride Up and down they yaw Eat no seed Things they are on wings Not on feet! Where twig'n'leaf no reef For them ever form Though their home be worm And by day they dorm Though they feed on rice Kept in barn, still mice Dream of flight by night!
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Animated Skeleton
Join Date: Jun 2004
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all very interesting...
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Then down the warrior tumbled/a long and weary way/ 'till at last he rested soundly/ among the water below/ bested by the darkness |
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Pilgrim Soul
Join Date: May 2004
Location: watching the wonga-wonga birds circle...
Posts: 9,461
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I'll get back to you...
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“But Finrod walks with Finarfin his father beneath the trees in Eldamar.”
Christopher Tolkien, Requiescat in pace |
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Ghost Prince of Cardolan
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I've got one in the works at the moment...but am suffering from a severe lack of creativity...so it may be awhile.
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Pilgrim Soul
Join Date: May 2004
Location: watching the wonga-wonga birds circle...
Posts: 9,461
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Bilbo's last song
Day is ended, dim my eyes, but journey long before me lies. Farewell, friends! I hear the call. The ship's beside the stony wall. Foam is white and waves are grey; beyond the sunset leads my way. Foam is salt, the wind is free; I hear the rising of the Sea. Farewell, friends! The sails are set, the wind is east, the moorings fret. Shadows long before me lie, beneath the ever-bending sky, but islands lie behind the Sun that I shall raise ere all is done; lands there are to west of West, where night is quiet and sleep is rest. Guided by the Lonely Star, beyond the utmost harbour-bar, I'll find the heavens fair and free, and beaches of the Starlit Sea. Ship, my ship! I seek the West, and fields and mountains ever blest. Farewell to Middle-earth at last. I see the Star above your mast! -- J. R. R. Tolkien A work in progress - I will try to complete tonight... but here is the first half... I hate myself for this - I love this poem and now I have twisted it's beautiful theme to tell of a journey to satisfy carnal pleasure rather than to heal a wounded soul.... Ah well Day is dawning, tired my eyes but long-haul flight before me lies. Come on friends! I hear the call - We must reach the departure hall. The lights are bright , the decor grey; We'll do some shopping on the way - Booze and fags from "Duty Free": I hear the tannoy calling me! Come on friends! Rush to the jet - board before the stewards fret! Hours long before me lie Jammed in a tin-can in the sky! But islands lie beneath the sun Where we shall land ere day is done.... to be concluded - I hope...
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“But Finrod walks with Finarfin his father beneath the trees in Eldamar.”
Christopher Tolkien, Requiescat in pace Last edited by Mithalwen; 08-06-2004 at 12:37 PM. Reason: typo |
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#6 |
Deadnight Chanter
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Oliphaunt
Grey as a mouse,
Big as a house, Nose like a snake, I make the earth shake, As I tramp through the grass; Trees crack as I pass. With horns in my mouth I walk in the South, Flapping big ears. Beyond count of years I stump round and round, Never lie on the ground, Not even to die. Oliphaunt am I, Biggest of all, Huge, old, and tall. If ever you'd met me, You wouldn't forget me. If you never do, You won't think I'm true; But old Oliphaunt am I. And I never lie. *** He’s blue as the sea Belly vast as a lea Tail like a hose He makes the sky doze As he dives to the deep To take his nap of sleep With scales on his back To the North is his tack Beady black eye Lung of mighty sigh Seething back and forth Making water froth Never comes ashore The whale of ole’ lore! Mighty and wise One of awful size In the waves to play While all sailors pray ‘May he turn aside’ ‘Hark! his teeth a-gride’ But he knows his lore Not to come ashore!
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Egroeg Ihkhsal - Would you believe in the love at first sight? - Yes I'm certain that it happens all the time! |
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Deadnight Chanter
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After long break
Gil-galad was an Elven-king.
Of him the harpers sadly sing: the last whose realm was fair and free between the Mountains and the Sea. His sword was long, his lance was keen, his shining helm afar was seen; the countless stars of heaven's field were mirrored in his silver shield. But long ago he rode away, and where he dwelleth none can say; for into darkness fell his star in Mordor where the shadows are. *** Kemen-ungol was a maiden brave Of her no man have seen the grave The first to die of darkling spell The first to pass beyond the knell Her thread was fast, her webs were bright The glittering hair and eyes of light The love she wove, the knitter true The truth, the beauty, gold on blue And so the envy, hatred long Have sent the death to maiden strong The windy plains of Shadow land Still cover grave with dust and sand
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