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View Poll Results: What do you think about the principle of 'ReVersing' | |||
Great! Keep it up! The poetry of the kind has an independent value, it deserves a book all to itself! |
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8 | 40.00% |
Good! It is re-creative in a sense it lives opon other’s work, but good application of one’s creative abilities nevertheless. Just don’t expect much from it |
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11 | 55.00% |
Indifferent. Really, it’s desultory. Have fun if you like, I don’t care, but stop forcing your megalomaniac ramblings on me! |
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1 | 5.00% |
Horrible! How dared you to deal with Tolkien in such an insulting way! Don’t even think about ReVersing another piece of rhyme! |
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0 | 0% |
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Deadnight Chanter
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In Dwimordene
preliminary note:
in the following verse, terms are rendered in a bit of a 'cheating' way. Indeed, Dwomordene, meaning "Magical Wood", is rendered to be Medwesea - i.e. Meadow-sea, which is not exact, but I hope to be excused, since the linking was as follows - magical ≠ ordinary ~ plain ~ meadow. Lorien - "Golden Wood" rendered to be Celebaer - Silver Sea". Opposing 'seals' to 'men' and elf Galdriel (Shining Garland) to polar bear Morigamp (Dark Claw) is deliberate, of course ![]() ======================== In Dwimordene, in Lórien Seldom have walked the feet of Men, Few mortal eyes have seen the light That lies there ever, long and bright. Galadriel! Galadriel! Clear is the water of your well; White is the star in your white hand; Unmarred, unstained is leaf and land In Dwimordene, in Lórien More fair than thoughts of Mortal Men *** On Medwesea, on Celebaer Seals often shy the passing bear Their ears sharp they prick by night The hunted shiver in their fright! O Morigamp! O Morigamp Under your paw the snow is damp! Keen are the teeth in gory jaw White is the fur but dark is claw! On Medwesea, on Celebaer Oft hunts the seals the polar bear!
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