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Itinerant Songster
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: The Edge of Faerie
Posts: 7,066
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I see my error, Helen. I hadn't expected Mellonin to wake up until the next morning. Since she woke up, I assumed it was morning. You didn't see it that way, did you?
I can fix my posts to make it still night time, if that would work better. I think it woul make for a lot of interesting dream sequences, - - - Marigold-influenced dream sequences. We ought to make something of that. Then the group can leave the next day after the burial. How's that? |
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Stormdancer of Doom
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OK! Sounds good.
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Itinerant Songster
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: The Edge of Faerie
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Immy, I hope I have not abused your characters. I felt like things needed a little jump start. If you want anything changed (or deleted), just let me know and I'll do it.
Let's have some Goldberry type dreams, everybody. Those of you who have connected up to the Nimrodel stuff, please do a dream sequence like that. I can imagine that Elves have wakeful dreams, Alak. How about giving it a try? Maybe I'll post something up as an example, and you can let me know what you think (such as "man, LMP sure has some nerve!). Helen has been ill and finally knows why (something like lyme disease), and that explains why she's been having trouble helping move Tapestry along. Anyway, Helen and I are thinking that after the dream sequences, I'll have Marigold to a Goldberry type washing day, then there will be the burial, then Aeron will decided whether he stays with Marigold or continues with the group, and then the group will take off after Tharonwe and Raefindan. |
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Stormdancer of Doom
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My save is at last filled in.
lmp, I love the old lady in the snow. Nice touch. Very nice touch. And now my pillow calls.
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Stormdancer of Doom
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Amroth's dream
Hey lmp,
It seems to me that Amroth's dream (just posted) belongs before breakfast... But it needs the snow. And Ædegard's introduction is so perfect. But I still think the dream needs to be before breakfast. (Although after the snowy gravediggging would be a nice touch, if Mellondu was still asleep.) Any ideas? Could Ædegard maybe come back in, see that many still sleep, and then the dream, and then breakfast...? --help
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Itinerant Songster
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: The Edge of Faerie
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I'll cut out the last bit about breakfast and announcement of the burial. I was trying to push things ahead to spark some interest of the others in the moving plot, but that is no longer necessary.
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Stormdancer of Doom
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Thanks.
Ædegard could wake Mellondu; he would appreciate it. He's not thrilled about drowning yet again. THen he and Mellonin can commiserate about bad dreams, and realise that Raefindan's been loitering outside an awfully long time.
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