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Ash of Orodruin
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I agree with Regin - something does need to be edited.
I personally would like Abarzadan to go figure out an escape plan, and if Menel wants to keep Thor with Azar and Inzi that should work out fine. Someone mentioned a while back that Sophie/TB12 had some sort of plan - does anyone know what it is or is it already in motion? - Him |
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La Belle Dame sans Merci
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Basically the idea was that not everyone in the city is power-hungry, cruel, and ready to slay all Faithful. There are obviously the down-trodden who aren't going to be all that happy with the King. So part of the idea was that when we (Inzi, Azarmano, Abarzadan, Thoronmir) were trying to get into the city, the guards who'd captured the others (Kathaani, Tiru, Marsillion) would get to the gate also (or one nearby). Enter, stage left, deux ex machina in the form of one of those very angry Valar induced storms. In the midst of the ruckus, the down-trodden help all the good guys out. So at this point, all are together again (except, of course, Mabalar) AND we're in the city. After this, my memory (which may be a little faulty in any case) trails out entirely. BUT... Soph hasn't been around (due to the insanity of real life, if I remember correctly, and never answered my last two PMs to her, sent over a month ago) so we went on and got ourselves into the city. So the current state of things: Mabalar: distressed that his wife is captured, near sacrifice, imprisoned Group A: wandering the dungeons with the keys Group B: in the hands of the Guards The Shopkeeper and Tarik: under the eye of pre-Mouth (will they be coming with us in the end?) Right now we need to tweak a few things. Since Abarzadan wants to explore the city, I recommend sending him out for escape routes. If agreeable, I think it would be good for him to spot Group B and be the one to relay the news. Thoronmir obviously stays with us, but I do agree that it seems a little too easy to just find Mabalar. I like the idea of that having been his cell, but he's been moved. Which would possibly turn us against whatshisyap because he gave us wrong information on Mabalar's whereabouts?What better than distrust to spice up and already spicy situation? Obviously Inzi continues the role of prisoner, since her wandering the dungeons when That Guy (pre-Mouth) knows she's there is a bad idea. Any how, I hope this post made some semblance of sense... I was thinking of quite a bit and now... I'm getting a birthday surprise but she won't tell me what it is... It's got my mind racing in such a fun way.
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Itinerant Songster
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: The Edge of Faerie
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I'm giving this a pound in the posterior. Any protests may be lodged here.
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Spirit of the Lonely Star
Join Date: Mar 2002
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Himaran and Littlemanpoet,
Please check your pms. Child
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La Belle Dame sans Merci
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Regin, would you be so kind as to incorporate a small out-of-character moment for Inzillomi in your post? Perhaps a quiet curse or two at discovering the empty cell met by perhaps disbelieving looks. Hard to be stoic when you realize that your quest just got even harder.. and when it's your husband's life on the line.
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Shade of Carn Dûm
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: Tumunzahar/Nogrod
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I put up my post. I ended it in such a way that other people can join in the fight before we skiddaddle. It shouldn't be a very long fight, since we really have to get out fast, but everyone who wants to can do a post.
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Itinerant Songster
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: The Edge of Faerie
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Sorry to be a wet blanket, but I had no intention of Mabalar being found in any cell the group could easily get to.
Here's what I was thinking (Let me know what you think.): Mabalar has been taken from his cell to be brought to the temple for sacrifice. Tarik didn't know this because he has been left out of the loop, having been found out by Herugor. Herugor is the one who has instigated the current situation. Mabalar exits from the dungeons into the central chamber of the temple only to discover that his daughter, Marsillion, and somebody else (can't remember off hand) are already being held there. That leaves Azarmano, Inzillomi, and Thoronmir, to come up behind and discover that the jig is up. Meanwhile, Tarik has head the same clang that they had heard, and rushes back to find that Mabalar's cell is empty. Either the group has released him that quickly or they have also been taken captive. He decides the latter, and gives chase, finding them looking through a small window into the great chamber, their hopes virtually crushed, watching Mabalar, Marsillion, Kataani, and ? being led to Sauron's altar by Herugor and his henchmen. That leaves three individuals unaccounted for and free agents: Himaran, Tar Miriel, and the guy who sells stuff whose name Mabalar would never forget ( ) but I did.So, what do you think? |
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