Outracing the Flames Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Nogrod · 04-28-2006, 05:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tevildo

Nogrod:

Would something like this help?

Looks nice!

I'll post my part this evening (it's afternoon now). Let's see it then...

piosenniel · 04-28-2006, 12:03 PM

I posted Tevildo's post to your SAVE, Nogrod.

Arry · 04-28-2006, 01:27 PM

OK - I'll be getting us to the next morning in a couple of hours and will post a brief burial scene for Rædwald that any can add to.

I'll be gone this weekend, away from a computer until Monday.

Feel free, anyone, to get us going toward Edoras after the funeral. If no one is able to, then I can do it when I return.

Nogrod · 04-28-2006, 05:28 PM

Tevildo: I made some changes to the last paragrah of your post - just changing the succession of events - so now Dorran first gives the potion, Sythric spits it out and then drinks it after Dorran's explanation... If it's ok., no need to comment - if there is, just tell me.

+ I used Dorran a bit. Just tell me if that is right or not.

+ If you would like to continue with the thoughts of Dorran, you could probably use this same SAVE as a place for it (I left there intentionally the note by Sythric for "the first time to meet the easterlings" - so if you want to go forwards from that, just go)

PS. Thanks Pio!

PS2. So, the SAVE filled...

Arry · 04-28-2006, 06:59 PM

My SAVE is filled - Rædwald is now on his funeral pyre . . .

Feel free to say a few words.

Farael · 04-29-2006, 11:21 AM

Hey guys,
I seem to have come down with something, I hope it's just a cold. I don't want to hold up the story now that we are moving along nicely, so if you all want to move on I'll just ask that someone's character talks to Osmod at Raewald's funeral and have him (Osmod) say that Raewald was a brave man and that his company will be missed or something along those lines. Other than that, feel free to move along, I'm sure I'll be fine by Monday. If not even sooner.

Nogrod · 04-30-2006, 04:57 AM

I'll try to fill my save today.

Undómë. I think we should put Sythric standing beside Meghan at the pyre - probably taking her in to his arms. These two anyway, were Raedwald's closest friends, and would be the most affected by his death.

So I think I write Sythric to take hold of Meghan, wrapping his right arm (not the left side...) around her and trying to comfort her - with no words. Then they would be the last people at the pyre (when others start packing up), just looking at it, side by side, not speaking anything.

If you think that ok., everything's fine. If you think that Meghan would react in some particular way, please let me know it.

04-28-2006, 12:03 PM	#2
piosenniel Desultory Dwimmerlaik Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Pickin' flowers with Bill the Cat..... Posts: 7,779	I posted Tevildo's post to your SAVE, Nogrod. __________________ Eldest, that’s what I am . . . I knew the dark under the stars when it was fearless - before the Dark Lord came from Outside.

04-28-2006, 01:27 PM	#3
Arry Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 704	OK - I'll be getting us to the next morning in a couple of hours and will post a brief burial scene for Rædwald that any can add to. I'll be gone this weekend, away from a computer until Monday. Feel free, anyone, to get us going toward Edoras after the funeral. If no one is able to, then I can do it when I return. __________________ If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world – J.R.R. Tolkien

04-28-2006, 05:28 PM	#4
Nogrod Flame of the Ainulindalë Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Wearing rat's coat, crowskin, crossed staves in a field behaving as the wind behaves Posts: 9,308	Tevildo: I made some changes to the last paragrah of your post - just changing the succession of events - so now Dorran first gives the potion, Sythric spits it out and then drinks it after Dorran's explanation... If it's ok., no need to comment - if there is, just tell me. + I used Dorran a bit. Just tell me if that is right or not. + If you would like to continue with the thoughts of Dorran, you could probably use this same SAVE as a place for it (I left there intentionally the note by Sythric for "the first time to meet the easterlings" - so if you want to go forwards from that, just go) PS. Thanks Pio! PS2. So, the SAVE filled... __________________ Upon the hearth the fire is red Beneath the roof there is a bed; But not yet weary are our feet... Last edited by Nogrod; 04-28-2006 at 05:37 PM.

04-28-2006, 06:59 PM	#5
Arry Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 704	My SAVE is filled - Rædwald is now on his funeral pyre . . . Feel free to say a few words. __________________ If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world – J.R.R. Tolkien

04-29-2006, 11:21 AM	#6
Farael Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: In hospitals, call rooms and (rarely) my apartment. Posts: 1,538	Hey guys, I seem to have come down with something, I hope it's just a cold. I don't want to hold up the story now that we are moving along nicely, so if you all want to move on I'll just ask that someone's character talks to Osmod at Raewald's funeral and have him (Osmod) say that Raewald was a brave man and that his company will be missed or something along those lines. Other than that, feel free to move along, I'm sure I'll be fine by Monday. If not even sooner. __________________ I prepared Explosive Runes this morning.

04-30-2006, 04:57 AM	#7
Nogrod Flame of the Ainulindalë Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Wearing rat's coat, crowskin, crossed staves in a field behaving as the wind behaves Posts: 9,308	I'll try to fill my save today. Undómë. I think we should put Sythric standing beside Meghan at the pyre - probably taking her in to his arms. These two anyway, were Raedwald's closest friends, and would be the most affected by his death. So I think I write Sythric to take hold of Meghan, wrapping his right arm (not the left side...) around her and trying to comfort her - with no words. Then they would be the last people at the pyre (when others start packing up), just looking at it, side by side, not speaking anything. If you think that ok., everything's fine. If you think that Meghan would react in some particular way, please let me know it. __________________ Upon the hearth the fire is red Beneath the roof there is a bed; But not yet weary are our feet...

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