Eorling Mead Hall Planning/Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Kath · 08-02-2006, 05:40 PM

lmp, sorry to be annoying but since you posted Lommy's post, would you mind changing that line of Frodides'? Just from:

“The children are always welcome in the kitchen”, Frodides said and smiled, “Strange that they haven’t come yet for a snack, those little darlings, too busy in their plays for even eating.”

To:

"Strange that they haven't yet come looking for food, they must be so caught up in their games they've clear forgotten about eating."

littlemanpoet · 08-02-2006, 05:49 PM

Done.

Kath · 08-02-2006, 05:53 PM

Thanks

08-02-2006, 05:40 PM	#1
Kath Everlasting Whiteness Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Perusing the laminated book of dreams Posts: 4,533	lmp, sorry to be annoying but since you posted Lommy's post, would you mind changing that line of Frodides'? Just from: “The children are always welcome in the kitchen”, Frodides said and smiled, “Strange that they haven’t come yet for a snack, those little darlings, too busy in their plays for even eating.” To: "Strange that they haven't yet come looking for food, they must be so caught up in their games they've clear forgotten about eating." __________________ “If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world.”

08-02-2006, 05:53 PM	#3
Kath Everlasting Whiteness Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Perusing the laminated book of dreams Posts: 4,533	Thanks __________________ “If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world.”

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08-02-2006, 05:49 PM	#2
littlemanpoet Itinerant Songster Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Edge of Faerie Posts: 7,066	Done.