The Fellowship of the Fourth Age (Part 1): A New Beginning Discussion Thread - The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum

Folwren · 09-26-2006, 02:41 PM

In the post I'm about to place, I used Shae a bit, Brinniel. If you need anything changed, let me know, of course, and I'll be quite happy to change it.

Hilde, I'd gotten from your last post that Carl was going to tell Athwen about Shae's hands. That's what he was speaking to her about when Aiwendil walks up. (Anyway, it will be, once I place my post.) I did not think that he would have mentioned the stone just then. If you want him to tell her sometime, you can write it.

And I think that's all. If not, I'll edit this again after I finish and place the post.

-- Folwren

Brinniel · 09-26-2006, 03:15 PM

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Her had feared being stopped by the slavers, attacked and forced to fight.

You mean "he" right? Not a major typo, but enough to almost confuse me...

I think everything looks good for Shae on your post, Folwren. I think I'll put in a save, but due the load of schoolwork I'm not sure how soon I can fill it. Friday night would probably be the latest; if that's too long, let me know and I'll remove it.

Folwren, most of my post will most likely be between Shae and Athwen. Let me know if there's anything specific you would like me to add into it.

Hilde Bracegirdle · 09-26-2006, 06:16 PM

Thanks Folwren. Carl with have to work up the courage to tell Athwen.

Folwren · 09-27-2006, 07:42 AM

Hm, yes, I did mean 'He had feared'. I'll fix that. Thanks.

I can't think of anything I want Athwen to do or say in particular, besidse trying to clean it and put something onto it to help it heal. She'll probably ask what it is from, though, but if Shae doesn't want to tell her, she's not likely to push for an answer.

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Originally Posted by Hilde

Thanks Folwren. Carl with have to work up the courage to tell Athwen.

I thought so.

Go ahead and work up the courage. I'm patient.

-- Folwren

Tevildo · 09-27-2006, 12:36 PM

Lindir and Dorran are doing a joint post. I've put Child's post in the save and will give my response for Dorran later, hopefully tonight. So for now please bear with me for a half done post.

Tevildo · 09-29-2006, 05:03 PM

I haven't forgotten the rest of my save. This has been a crazy week. Every time I set aside time to write, something messes it up!

Tevildo · 09-30-2006, 06:42 PM

OK, I filled my save. I put it in a new post. Child wrote the end of the post and I put that up with mine.

09-26-2006, 02:41 PM	#1
Folwren Messenger of Hope Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: In a tiny, insignificant little town in one of the many States. Posts: 5,076	In the post I'm about to place, I used Shae a bit, Brinniel. If you need anything changed, let me know, of course, and I'll be quite happy to change it. Hilde, I'd gotten from your last post that Carl was going to tell Athwen about Shae's hands. That's what he was speaking to her about when Aiwendil walks up. (Anyway, it will be, once I place my post.) I did not think that he would have mentioned the stone just then. If you want him to tell her sometime, you can write it. And I think that's all. If not, I'll edit this again after I finish and place the post. -- Folwren __________________ A young man who wishes to remain a sound atheist cannot be too careful of his reading. - C.S. Lewis

09-27-2006, 12:36 PM	#5
Tevildo Shade of Carn Dûm Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Curled up on Melko's lap Posts: 425	Lindir and Dorran are doing a joint post. I've put Child's post in the save and will give my response for Dorran later, hopefully tonight. So for now please bear with me for a half done post. __________________ Now Tevildo was a mighty cat--the mightiest of all--and possessed of an evil spirit,...and he was in Melko's constant following; and that cat had all cats subject to him, and he and his subjects were the chasers and getters of meat for Melko's table.

09-29-2006, 05:03 PM	#6
Tevildo Shade of Carn Dûm Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Curled up on Melko's lap Posts: 425	I haven't forgotten the rest of my save. This has been a crazy week. Every time I set aside time to write, something messes it up! __________________ Now Tevildo was a mighty cat--the mightiest of all--and possessed of an evil spirit,...and he was in Melko's constant following; and that cat had all cats subject to him, and he and his subjects were the chasers and getters of meat for Melko's table.

09-30-2006, 06:42 PM	#7
Tevildo Shade of Carn Dûm Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Curled up on Melko's lap Posts: 425	OK, I filled my save. I put it in a new post. Child wrote the end of the post and I put that up with mine. __________________ Now Tevildo was a mighty cat--the mightiest of all--and possessed of an evil spirit,...and he was in Melko's constant following; and that cat had all cats subject to him, and he and his subjects were the chasers and getters of meat for Melko's table.

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09-26-2006, 06:16 PM	#3
Hilde Bracegirdle Relic of Wandering Days Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: You'll See Perpetual Change. Posts: 1,480	Thanks Folwren. Carl with have to work up the courage to tell Athwen.